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Post by mudfeather on Jan 14, 2009 18:30:19 GMT -6
1. Name: Mudfeather
2. Pack (or house pet): DawnPack
3. Rank preferred(dont answer if house pet): Deputy
4. RP Sample (min of 5 sentances): Mudfeather stood silhouetted against the breezes that ruffled his pelt a bit. He let out a deep exhale before drawing in another breath, his chest slightly heaving. Paws carried him to a small tree, where his head bent to sniff at it. A growl rippled through his chest, and he turned around cursing. "Those Fox-Brained loners!" He returned to his Pack den quickly, and immediately reported to the leader her news. He paced quickly, and as soon as he was at the den, he waisted no time. He ran to the leaders den to report his resent findings. Hopefully the leader would let him take some experienced Warriors to go take care of the problem. Maybe they could track down those fox-brained loners.
5. Dream Owner: Wolf Packs of the Wind
6. Pack Owner(dont answer if you are house pet):Tjtum16 the silver dragon
7.Packs are: FirePack, FrostPack, WildPack, DawnPack, HellPack, and CloudPack
8. Pack Owners are: Darkenedflower(Fire), Wolfaun(Frost), Mimi Line(Wild), Tjtum16 the silver dragon(Dawn), ShiroAsh(Hell), and CloudPack has no leader, for they are the fallen acestors.
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Post by Wolfaun on Jan 14, 2009 18:49:32 GMT -6
Also, one of the greatest Apps seen! I only spotted one problem, in the RP. You called your character a "her" when clearly most the RP was "him" but that will not do any harm. Accepted! Since Tj has not been on for a long time and has not paid much visit to the dream, I shall accept you. You have a large chance of becoming leader of Dawnpack.
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Post by ~mimi Line~ on Jan 16, 2009 23:55:18 GMT -6
Yeh it was a very well stated app;Good job;Luck to your pack.
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